Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学的学生李华，不慎遗失校图书馆的书籍Adventurers in Desert, 对此深表歉意。请根据以下要点给校图书馆写一封电子邮件。

1.表示歉意。

2.给予解释。

3.你的打算。

注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.

I read it every evening and had intended to finish it the following week, but unfortunately yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I tried to find it but I failed. I really had no idea what to do with it, but I promise to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and it is I who am to blame. This is also a warning to me to be careful in the future. I will pay a visit to you on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation for the missing book.

I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness. Definitely, such a thing will never happen again.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求对你不慎遗失校图书馆的书籍Adventurers in Desert写一封道歉信。此类作文通常分三段来写，第一段说明写信的目的；第二段介绍事情，第三段再次表示道歉。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：灵活变换；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）表示歉意；（2）给予解释；（3）你的打算。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

【亮点说明】

本文属于提纲类作文，采用三段式，格式正确，语言简练，结构严谨，布局合理，使用高级句子。I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.使用宾语从句；when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. when引导时间状语从句；I know money cannot cover the loss and it is I who am to blame.句中运用强调句式；I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness. that定语从句使用得当；另外，had intended to finish, but unfortunately等的运用为文章增色添彩。