Question

17．假设你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Katie发来的电子邮件，请根据以下邮件内容进行回复．
注意
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．

Dear Katie，
I'm glad that you let me know about your problem．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，it  is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．首先，参加一个中文学习班是非常重要的，因为你可以从老师那里学到很多并且可以和你的同学们一起练习中文．
高分句型二：
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．除此以外，学会唱中文歌是一个很好的学习方法，英文那样你可以更容易的学会并记住汉字．
句型一 ①it  is important to take a Chinese course 使用了it作形式主语 不定式作真正的主语的重要句型
           ②as you'll be to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．此句为原因状语从句
句型二 句中使用了besides，by doing sth 等重要的惯用表达和短语

解答 Dear Katie，
     I am glad that you let me know about your problem．As for your problem，it's really inconvenient to commounicate with others if you don't know much about Chinese．Don't worry，here are a few suggestions on how to learn Chinese well，which can help you out．
    First，it  is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and mageazines in chinese whenever possible．Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型二）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
    Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
       Best wishes．

点评 本书面表达有点开放式的类型，此类书面表达要求考生根据给出的简短的英语提示结合自己的理解进行写作，这样给了考生很大的自由发挥的空间，写作时应注意切忌偏题．