Question

7．假如你是李华，最近你在浏览一个澳大利亚中学网站时，看到一位名叫Jack的中学生的留言，他计划在暑假期间到中国桂林旅游，希望能有一名中国高中生做他的导游．你对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点提示写一封e-mail给他，介绍相关情况．
    主要内容包括：
    1希望义务做他的导游；
    2．简略介绍桂林；
    3．打算如何给他做导游；
    4．期盼他的回复．
    注意：
    1词数100左右；
    2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
    3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，…
                                                                               
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封电子邮件．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：表达意愿，自我介绍，具体做法，期待回复．其次，要以第一人称来表述．最后要注意时态以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
intend to do sth 打算做某事
scenic spots 景点
stunning beauty 美景
look forward to 期盼
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．
句中while连接时间状语从句，从句中省略了相同的主语和系动词．
I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．
句中现在分词enjoying作伴随状语．
I feel it a great honor to be your guide．
句中it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式．

解答 Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．（高分句型一）I am pleased to know that you intend to travel in Guilin during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide．（表达意愿）
I am a native of Guilin and know the city very well．Therefore，I volunteer to be your tour guide．Guilin is a famous international tourist city．It is well-known for its beautiful scenery．On the one hand，I will keep you company visiting the beautiful scenic spots．I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．（高分句型二）On the other hand，I will tell you the long and rich history of Guilin．（介绍桂林和自己的打算）
Of course，you will taste a lot of special local food，such as rice noodles．
Look forward to your reply．I feel it a great honor to be your guide．（高分句型三）（期待回复）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．