Question

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了作者和妻子开车去购物，回来时发现车门打不开，于是请警察帮忙．等车门打开后，一个人对我们大喊大叫，原来是开了别人的车门．

解答 I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing∧my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．
详解：
1．drive改为drove；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．the去掉；短语搭配错误．in front of在外部的前面，in the front of是内部的前面．
3．late改为later；副词错误．late是迟到的意思，句意表达的是一个小时后，要用later来构成．
4．strangely改为strange；形容词错误．句中strange作系动词的表语，要用形容词形式．
5．But改为So；连词错误．句意表达的是因果，不是转折．
6．minute改为minutes；名词错误．句中有a few修饰，可数名词要用复数．
7．加with；短语搭配错误．do with处理…，常用短语．
8．surprising改为surprised；分词错误．句中surprise作系动词的表语，表示主语we的感受，要用过去分词构成的形容词．
9．they改为we；代词错误．句意指代的是我们，不是他们．
10．speak改为say；短语搭配错误．say sorry to sb向某人道歉．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．