Question

【题目】假定你是李华，曾经在你校做交换生的新西兰高中生Peter想了解你们学校近年来的变化，请给他写信。要点如下：

1.校内外环境；

2.教学设施；

3.学习生活。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I am writing to tell you the big changes in our school in the past years.

The surrounding was much more beautiful with more trees and flowers planted in and around our school. Two new buildings were built recently. One is the school library with a variety of books for us to read, and the other is the new teaching building with advanced equipment, where we enjoy ourselves studying. Besides, we have more options of courses including a new one—the class about career planning.

Hope that you can come to our school again.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，曾经在你校做交换生的新西兰高中生Peter想了解你们学校近年来的变化，请给他写信。要点如下：1.校内外环境；2.教学设施；3.学习生活。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：surrounding (环境)；a variety of (各种各样的)；advanced equipment (先进的设备)；options(选择)；career planning(职业规划)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。