Question

13．请阅读下列文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．

We suffer from pollution．"I can't bear the smog in this city any more．It's getting worse and worse．"said Wang Tao，a senior citizen in Beijing． "I'm often disturbed by loud noise during my work and sleep．"said a senior student from Shenzhen． Many of China's waterways are largely unfit for direct human use because of industrialization． A 2015report estimated that 1.6million people in China die each year from heart，lung and stroke problems because of polluted air． New technologies have promoted the development of urbanization and economy．While economic growth may continue，the rewards of this growth may be opposed by the harm from the pollution unless environmental protection is increased．

Top pollution sources in Chinese cities  Vehicles  Coal-burining  Airborne dust  Mobile sources  Industrial production

【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2．请根据以上图文信息简述污染的情况及其原因；
3．从可持续发展的角度提出你对治理城市污染的建议（不少于两点）．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
                                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Various forms of pollution，including air pollution，noise pollution，and water pollution，have increased with the fast development of Chinese cities，which has caused many problems and concerns．
高分句型二：
Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in．
句型一 which has caused many problems and concerns 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中做主语，替代前面的整个主句
句型二 Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in 该句中包含有一个倒装句．当only位于句首且修饰介词短语时，句子要使用部分倒装：can we have a better world to live in 即主语同谓语部分助动词进行位置的交换
此外，该书面表达中还包含有以下重要短语和高级词汇：
with the development of   伴随着．．的发展      take measures to do sth   采取措施做某事    what's more  而且
该书面表达中的重要句型部分的从句的使用和高级短语和词汇的使用，使得文章更层次分明，表述更加确切完整．

解答 As the diagram shows，vehicles，coal-burning，airborne dust，mobile sources and industrial production are the major pollution sources in Chinese cities，which have damaged our life，environment and even the future development．
   Various forms of pollution，including air pollution，noise pollution，and water pollution，have increased with the fast development of Chinese cities，which has caused many problems and concerns．（污染情况说明）（高分句型一）
   With the development of modern industry and expansion of urbanization，pollution is becoming more and more serious． Measures must be taken to balance city development and environmental protection．First of all，our government should make more strict laws to limit the use of private cars．What's more，we are supposed to raise our awareness of environmental protection and push for the use of alternative energy，such as solar energy and wind energy．Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in．（措施采取）（高分句型二）

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．