Question

【题目】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

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请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain. As soon as we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the summit in high spirits. During the climb, we had such much difficulty passing the rocky areas. But under the teacher’s help, we eventually reached the top, where we greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Seeing from the top, the city was extreme beautiful. This event turned out to be very success. Not only did we take a break from our heavy school work, and also we learned what to communicate with each other.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】had去掉

【2】a--the

【3】such--so

【4】under--with

【5】we后面加were

【6】Seeing--Seen

【7】extreme--extremely

【8】success--successful

【9】and--but

【10】what--hwo

【解析】

【1】had去掉 考查动词的时态。根据last week可知用一般过去时；

【2】a--the 考查冠词。句意：当我们到达山脚下时，我们精神饱满的出发。The表示特指；

【3】such—so 考查固定句型。So much用来修饰不可数名词。

【4】under—with 考查介词。With the help of 在。。的帮助下；

【5】we后面加were 考查动词的语态。Be greeted by 受到。。的问候；

【6】Seeing--Seen 考查非谓语动词。句意：从山顶看这个城市，非常漂亮。The city与see之间是动宾关系，故用Seen

【7】extreme--extremely 考查副词。副词extremely用来修饰形容词beautiful.

【8】success--successful 考查形容词 。句意：这件事很成功。形容词做表语。

【9】and--but 考查连词。Not only …but also。。不仅。。而且。

【10】what—how 考查宾语从句。句意：我们也学到如何进行沟通。

考点 ：短文改错。