Question

【题目】书面表达

9月15日，超强台风“莫兰蒂”(Meranti)袭击厦门，造成巨大的损失。解放军战士及时实施救援。假设你是来自厦门的李华，请你用英语给解放军写一封感谢信。信的内容要点如下：

1. 台风袭击；

2. 解放军救援情况；

3. 表达谢意。

注意：1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear officers,

I am writing to ______________________________________________________________

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Best wishes,

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear officers,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you. On September 15, the super typhoon Meranti swept Xiamen, causing great damage. Xiamen was almost reduced to ruins overnight, with a large number of trees fallen down and the electricity and water cut off.

Fortunately, you came to our rescue immediately. You were seen removing the broken branches of trees, replanting the fallen trees, and helping to restore the electricity and water supply. It especially touched me when you had lunch at the rescue scene so as to save time. It occurred to me that but for your help, Xiamen could not have return to normal so soon.

Your help really means a lot to us, and I really hope to have the opportunity to repay our unselfish devotion.

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇感谢信，格式正确，采用三段式，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。On September 15, the super typhoon Meranti swept Xiamen, causing great damage.现在分词作自然的结果状语；Xiamen was almost reduced to ruins overnight, with a large number of trees fallen down and the electricity and water cut off. with的独立主格结构表伴随状态；It especially touched me when you had lunch at the rescue scene so as to save time. when引导时间状语从句；It occurred to me that but for your help, Xiamen could not have return to normal so soon.it作形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句。