Question

【题目】假定你是李华，今年二月你随父母去伦敦旅游。现因当时找回丢失的钱包，用英语给Steveston London Secondary School 的校长写一封感谢信，感谢该校拾金不昧的学生Alvin Hill。

注意：1．词数100左右

2．可以适当增加细节，简述丢失和找回钱包的过程，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：大英博物馆the British Museum护照passport

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’m now writing to convey my sincere thanks to one of your students for his kindness.

In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum. One day, it took us a whole day to tour the British Museum. So enjoyable a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we stayed that we realized my father’s wallet was missing. We were more than worried because in addition to a large sum of money, the wallet also contained our passports and air tickets. We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance. We were so relieved and grateful. Later, we learned from the manager that he is a student from your school, named Alvin Hill.

Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to him and the school he attends.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，用英语给Steveston London Secondary School 的校长写一封感谢信，感谢该校拾金不昧的学生Alvin Hill。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：简述丢失和找回钱包的过程。抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般过去时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:1、提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充；2、为使文章层次清楚，可分三个自然段写：第一自然段说明自己写信的目的；第二自然段叙述事情的经过；第三自然段再次表达自己的感谢之情。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: together with和，pick up捡起。还使用了定语从句In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum.和定语从句We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。