Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：

1. 中医简介；

2. 家庭影响；

3. 个人愿望。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

Thanks for your letter! I’m very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.

With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe it’ll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：总分

要求：

1.回信的目的

2.

1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）

2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）

3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医）

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up one’s mind to do/ major in /turn out

第三步：连词成句

I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.

With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness.

It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.

As you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.

I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud when the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.

I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor.

I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）

1. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…

2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for

3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last

4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result

第五步：修改润色(加入从句)