Question

【题目】假设你是晨光中学学生李津，你校应英籍教师Lucy近期准备回英国度假，你班同学准备举行晚会为她送行。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封邮件，邀请她参加晚会。

⑴表示感谢；

⑵晚会时间和地点；

⑶活动内容。

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；

2. 请适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

Dear Lucy,

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Yours,

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much when you are on leave!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we have decided to have a farewell party this Saturday for you. The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope you can join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China again soon. I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】这是一篇议论文。文章内容提示已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.

行文思路要有逻辑性，在中心论点给出后要由浅入深，做到力求全面。该文写作的难点主要是如何更好的叙述这三点。因为所有考生的大致内容都是一样的所以主要是看能不能写出让考官眼前一亮 的作文。同时要使文章的内容充实，不能显得无力。学生可以采用简单句和复杂句结合的方法，并且同时穿插一些祈使句和倒装句使文章充实。

【范文亮点】

文章开篇给出了全文的写作背景“We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon.”.言简意赅，主旨鲜明。要点明确。分条清晰：1.表示感谢 express our gratitude for your excellent teaching2.说明时间地点：The party will start at 6:30 on Saturday evening in the classroom of Class 12, Grade 3 。3.说明年呢内容： singing some English songs and have a good time together文章结构紧凑。文中还用了express our gratitude for；return to； have a good time；looking forward to receiving 等高级短语让文章看起来更有料，To start with等连接词使行文非常流畅。特别是文章第二段第一句和结尾最后一句内容让阅卷老师眼前一亮。