Question

15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Stress is a state of being upset that happen when we are under pressure．We students have all experienced stress over problems in our daily life，test results，or too many homework．Since stress can make us sick，we have to learn what to deal with it．When you are stressful，don't forget your hobbies．If you are fond music，just turn on the radio．Generally，people think TV may interfere（妨碍）with their children's studies．However，if you worry about that your English and don't know what to do，you can get help from English TV programs．It is also help to share your worries to your friends．They will surely give you some advices and help you out of trouble．As long as we treat stress proper，we can relax ourselves and keep away from its bad effects．

Answer 1

分析 本文阐释的是减小压力的方法．
我们学生都会有压力的体会，因此要学会怎样对付压力．如果你喜欢音乐，打开收音机就可以起到作用．看英文的电视节目可以有助于学习英语，朋友的建议也是有用的．只要我们能合理的对待压力，我们就能放松自己，摆脱它的负面影响．

解答 Stress is a state of being upset thathappen when we are under pressure．We students have all experienced stress over problems in our daily life，test results，or too many homework．Since stress can make us sick，we have to learn what to deal with it．When you are stressful，don't forget your hobbies．If you are fond∧music，just turn on the radio．Generally，people think TV may interfere（妨碍）with their children's studies．However，if you worry about that your English and don't know what to do，you can get help from English TV programs．It is also help to share your worries to your friends．They will surely give you some advices and help you out of trouble．As long as we treat stress proper，we can relax ourselves and keep away from its bad effects．
解析：
1．happen-happens．考查主谓一致关系．定语从句的谓语动词happen和先行词a state of being upset 一致，而且本文讨论的是事实，所以用一般现在时态的第三人称单数happens．
 2．many-much．考查不可数名词的修饰词．homework．是不可数名词，所以用much修饰，many修饰可数名词．                                                                            
3．what-how．考查疑问词．修饰动词不定式to deal with it用how，表示"怎样处理压力"．                       
4．stressful-stressed．考查单词辨析．修饰主语you用stressed，表示"感到压力的"，stressful修饰物，表示"产生压力的"．
5．fond后加of．考查介词．固定短语be fond of表示"喜欢"．
6．去掉that．考查代词．your English 是名词短语，所以worry about 直接修饰它，不需要that．
7．help-helpful．考查单词变形．做表语，表示"有帮助的"应该用形容词helpful，help是名词．
8．to-with．考查介词．固定短语share sth with sb，表示"和某人分享某物"，所以用with．                                 
9．advices-advice．考查名词．advice是不可数名词，所以不加s．
10．proper-properly．考查副词．修饰动词短语treat stress 用副词properly．

点评 考查短文改错．
总结常用的不可数名词．
最常见的不可数名词有：advice，baggage，change（零钱），furniture，hair，homework，information，knowledge，luggage，money，news，progress，traffic．