Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、 只允许修改10处 ，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.

My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.

【1】【2】【3】【4】【5】

【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】a → an

【2】Disappointing → Disappointed

【3】patiently → patient

【4】decided 后加to。

【5】get→ got

【6】student →students

【7】which 前的and去掉。

【8】him → me

【9】tell → tells

【10】for → of

【解析】

【1】a改成an。important开头是元音，因此冠词应该用an。句意：三年前,我在一场重要的考试中失利，,成为了一名普通学校的学生。

【2】disappointing改成disappointed;feel disappointed过去分词做形容词表状态，感到失望。句意：令我失望的是简陋的校园和研习教室。

【3】we改成I;一句话中的主语前后应统一，故此处也应为I。句意：我发现老师非常的耐心和体贴。

【4】on改成in;在课堂上，因此介词改为in。句意：此外,我很享受课堂上友好的气氛。

【5】make和best之间加the;固定短语make the best of充分利用；故应加the。句意：我决定充分利用这一点。

【6】work改成worked；结合上下文时态，此处应改为过去时。句意：我努力学校并且和老师同学都相处得非常好。

【7】student改成students；根据下文I became one of the top student in my class可知，one of后应接名词复数，故改为stutents。句意：很快我就成为了班上的尖子生。

【8】去掉not；老师同学们对我帮助很大，故去掉not。句意：不论何时我遇到困难，他们都会来帮助我。

【9】confident改成confidence；my后面应接名词形式,故改为confidence。句意：这极大地提升了我的自信并且让我更积极。

【10】which改成that；调句型结构形式it is not…but…that ；My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it whichdetermines who you are.句意：我的经验告诉我,决定你是一个什么样的人的不是你得到什么，而是你怎样利用它。强调句中，how you make use of it为主语；故只能用结构词that引导。