Question

12．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了HEART-TO-HEART专栏．假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信．信中该同学向你诉说了你自己的困扰；近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响．请用英文给该同学写一封回信．
内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由．
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：temper n．脾气，情绪
Hi Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．
           ．
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal．
Yours，
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知需要用第一和第二人称来叙述，时态用一般现在时态．文章分成三部分：一 表示理解并给予安慰；二 提出建议并说明理由；三提出希望．
高分句型：
1．The truth（主语） is that （引导表语从句）everyone will have one of those periods when （引导定语从句，修饰periods）things seem to be going wrong，so（连接并列句） you don't have to worry so much．
真相是每个人都有这么一段时间，在这段时间，很多事情好像都是错误的，所以你不必如此焦虑．
Second，go outdoors and play games with your friends（祈使句，以动词原形开头） as （引导原因状语从句）physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger
第二，和你的朋友去户外做游戏，因为体育锻炼是摆脱怒火的有效方法．

解答 Hi Worried，
　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you don't have to worry so much（高分句型一）．The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret．（表示理解并给予安慰）Here are three useful tips：
　　First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel．This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself．Second，go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger（高分句型二）．And third，remain optimistic about your future．Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits（提出建议并说明理由）．
　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal（提出希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Jamie

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．