Question

20．春节期间燃放烟花爆竹是我们中华民族的传统，但每年很多人因此而伤亡．是否该禁止燃放烟花爆竹一直是人们热议的话题．请按下面的要求，用英语写成一篇100-120字的短文，向21世纪英文报投稿．
请就此话题谈谈你的看法，至少列出两条理由；
提出合理建议．
注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）．
Fireworks display 燃放烟花爆竹
Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．There are reasons as follows：
First of all，it is very dangerous to set off fireworks．Every year，it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．In some cases it even causes big fires，turning into tragic disasters．Secondly，fireworks will cause a lot of pollution，air and noise，for example，to the earth and our neighborhoods，especially at night．
Therefore，I think we should not set off fireworks in the Spring Festival．If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．Undoubtedly，they are safe to play and cause much less pollution．What's more，they can be used repeatedly，thus saving much money．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．在写作时，考生应该尽可能地减少错误，避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句子．如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误，就得不偿失了．在保证准确的前提下，考生才可以考虑句式的变化，应用较多的语法结构．提醒考生注意动词的时态及语气．
重点短语和句型：
ban 禁止
set off fireworks 然放烟花
create the joyful atmosphere 营造快乐的氛围
it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．
句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．
it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．
句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句．
If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．
句中if连接条件状语从句．

解答 Whether fireworks display should be banned during the Spring Festival has been long debated．As far as I am concerned，it is really necessary to ban fireworks display in the Spring Festival．（高分句型一） There are reasons as follows：【表达看法】
     First of all，it is very dangerous to set off fireworks．Every year，it is reported that setting off fireworks has caused many deaths and injuries．（高分句型二）In some cases it even causes big fires，turning into tragic disasters．Secondly，fireworks will cause a lot of pollution，air and noise，for example，to the earth and our neighborhoods，especially at night．【说明理由】
    Therefore，I think we should not set off fireworks in the Spring Festival．If we really want to create the joyful atmosphere of the traditional festival，electronic fireworks may be a good choice．（高分句型三）Undoubtedly，they are safe to play and cause much less pollution．What's more，they can be used repeatedly，thus saving much money．【提出建议】

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．