Question

3．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That's right-sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy．
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you？
*考拉即树袋熊
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词就"该不该禁止游客和动物拍照"进行议论，内容包括：
（1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；
（2）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；
（3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照．
[写作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．
The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．
If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．No doubt we do and so do the animals．
I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要讲述了考拉因总是被游客拍照打扰导致半睡半醒而不开心，引出了该不该禁止游客和动物拍照的作文话题．考生应按照要求写作，先概括内容，再根据三个要点内容展开自己的观点．在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般现在时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 sort of 有点，有几分，no doubt，无疑，
高分句子：
1．The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．本句含有重要句型The reasons why…，…的原因是．
2．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．本句前半句为现在分词做状语，丰富句子内容．

解答 The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．（概括短文内容）
    The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．（高分句型）Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．（描述为何人类喜欢和动物拍照）
    If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．（高分句型）No doubt we do and so do the animals．（假设我是动物的反应）
    I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．（总结，认为不应该拍照）

点评 要想使自己的书面表达得高分，首先要做到扬长避短．"扬长"就是发挥自身的优势，使用熟练掌握的句型，"避短"就是避开自己的弱点，尽量做到不犯错误或少犯错误，这是读写任务得分的关键所在．