Question

你的朋友杰克写信给你叙述了以下内容：1.他发现现在很多学生很自私，不在乎友谊。2.他觉得父母与老师不理解他。3.他发现生活没有乐趣。看到他的信你很着急，作为好朋友请以汤姆的身份给他写一封回信解决他的烦恼，以下三点为主要内容：1.不是所有人都自私，要学会沟通；2.学会与父母真诚沟通；3.把注意力多集中在学习上

注意：1.词数100左右

2.可以适当地增加细节，以便行文连贯

3.开头语已为你写好

Dear Jack,

Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter.

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack

Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter. From your letter, I know maybe you are not getting along well with your new classmates.Perhaps several of them are selfish.But I am sure ,most of them should be friendly.just try to communicate with them.Then it comes to your misunderstanding between you and your parents and your teacher. I think it is you who are to blame. You must have been told that both our parents and our teachers are kind to us .so talk with them sincerely to solve the problem.Please pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness in the knowledge. And remember: you are always my best friend.I hope you can be surrounded by happiness every moment.

Yours Tom

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是一篇提纲式书信体作文。作文除了开头句的内容外，针对杰克写信叙述内容提到的三个要点逐一予       以回复。文章要点提示较多，可以直接依据提供的要点，按照写作的几个步骤（审题——注要点——圈短语——连成句，篇——查病错），将文章翻译出来即可。注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，平时除了加强词汇及高级句型积累。

【亮点说明】A.多变的高级句式如强调的运用 it is you who are to blame及祈使句+and+陈述句的灵活运用 pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness 还有 it comes to....(当谈到…)及情态动词被动语态的使用must have been told B.短语的灵活运用,如get along well with与…相处融洽，communicate with与…交流，be surrounded by被…围绕着。

考点：提纲作文。