Question

假如你是天津一中学生李华，你从网上看到John在某英语俱乐部网站发布了—个帖子，邀请各国爱好英语的学生参加该俱乐部，以加强交流，提高英语水平。请你根据以下提示，用英语写—封电子邮件，决定参加该俱乐部，并希望交更多的朋友。要点如下。

  1)简单介绍自己（如：哪国人、读几年级、爱好）；

  2)参加俱乐部的原因（包括交朋友和提高英语水平）；

  3)加入俱乐部后的打算(……)o

  注意：1）词数100左右；2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3）开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John

I'm glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English_______

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  Yours，

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear John,

    I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English. I’m interested in it and want to join the club.

    My name is Li Hua , a student from Tianjin No. 1 Middle School. I ‘m Chinese.  I like English very much and have won many prizes in English speech contests. I think I ‘ll make full use of the chance to practice my English, such as communicating with others in English and helping organize activities for the members. I ‘ll also make friends with students from different countries, so we can learn from each other in order to improve our English.

I hope I’ll be accepted as a member of the club. If so, I’ll try my best to take an active part in all kinds of activities.

Looking forward to your reply.                   

                                                                  Yours

                                                                  Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假如你是天津一中学生李华，你从网上看到John在某英语俱乐部网站发布了—个帖子，邀请各国爱好英语的学生参加该俱乐部，以加强交流，提高英语水平。请你根据以下提示，用英语写—封电子邮件，决定参加该俱乐部，并希望交更多的朋友。要点如下。1)简单介绍自己（如：哪国人、读几年级、爱好）；2)参加俱乐部的原因（包括交朋友和提高英语水平）； 3)加入俱乐部后的打算(……)。

需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】be interested in对……感兴趣，I think I ‘ll make full use of the chance to practice my English, such as communicating with others in English and helping organize activities for the members.包含一个宾语从句。

考点：话题类书面表达