Question

请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

People nowadays are facing more and more pressures in life and therefore they are more likely to do something they like in their spare time. They hold the belief that a hobby is a good way to relax themselves and live a colorful life.

注意：1、无需写标题；

2、除诗歌外，文体不限；

3、内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

4、文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；

5、字数不少于120词，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Answer 1

Hobbies are of great importance to those who deal with a lot of pressures at work and in life, since they help them relax and feel free from pressures.

Fishing is my favorite hobby and it enables me to get over depression. At the end of September, the first monthly exam was held. Unfortunately, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, both of which used to be my strong subjects. As a result, my total test score fell dramatically and ranked 400th in our grade. I felt upset afterwards and my mother suggested I should spend some time on my hobby--- fishing for relaxation on a weekend. Packing up my fishing equipment, I was driven to a fishing pond by my father. There I fished for a whole day and calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successfully pushed me out of low spirits.

It's important for everyone to have a hobby, which can function as a way of fighting off pressure and regaining confidence.

【解析】这是一篇自由发挥写作，题目为现代生活中人们有许多压力，在业余时间他们更愿意做一些他们喜欢的事情，他们认为兴趣是放松的好方式。可知本写作主要围绕兴趣，任何题材皆可。

范文主要讲述我的兴趣：钓鱼。本文为经典的三段式写作，第一段Hobbies are of great importance to those who deal with a lot of pressures at work and in life, since they help them relax and feel free from pressures.就使用了who领导的定语从句，since领导的原因状语从句；第二段第三句I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, both of which used to be my strong subjects.使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句；第五句I felt upset afterwards and my mother suggested I should spend some time on my hobby使用了suggest领导的宾语从句；第六句Packing up my fishing equipment, I was driven to a fishing pond by my father.使用了状语从句的省略；最后一句It's important for everyone to have a hobby, which can function as a way of fighting off pressure and regaining confidence.使用了一个非限制性定语从句，收束全文。在短语运用上，使用了诸如deal with应对…，used to过去经常…..，As a result结果….，as a way of作为…的方式，短语运用十分灵活；在词语运用上也十分精彩，如使用了Unfortunately一个副词单独成句，词语运用十分好。整篇文章亮点很多，从句运用十分灵活，短语运用精彩，词语运用十分严谨。总结：自由发挥写作时应选择最为简单的题材如记叙文，议论文等文体来写

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