Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校英国交换生Thompson邀请你去参观美术展览，但你已经看过。现在你邀请他参观另一个展览。内容包括：

1. 说明不去的理由；

2. 邀请他参加因特网科技展览；

3. 参观时间地点。

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Thompson,

I’m grateful that you’ve invited me to visit the art show. But it’s a great pity that I can’t go with you as I’ve already seen it. However, I’d like to invite you to go to another exhibition, which is about the technology of the Internet. It is said that some most advanced products and inventions of telecommunication will be on show, including the newest cellphones. Many new functions have added to them, making the phones more useful. I’m sure you will have a good time.

The show will be held at 9 o’clock a.m. next Monday at the city exhibition centre.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：你校英国交换生Thompson邀请你去参观美术展览，但你已经看过。现在你邀请他参观另一个展览。内容包括：说明不去的理由；邀请他参加因特网科技展览；参观时间地点。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：visit the art show（参观艺术展）；go to another exhibition（去另一个展览）；the technology of the Internet（电脑科技）；some most advanced products and inventions of telecommunication（一些最先进的电讯产品和发明）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件。文章内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子和短语。I’m grateful that you’ve invited me to visit the art show.句中使用宾语从句；it’s a great pity that I can’t go with you as I’ve already seen it.主语从句和原因状语从句完美结合；I’d like to invite you to go to another exhibition, which is about the technology of the Internet.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；Many new functions have added to them, making the phones more useful.句中现在分词做伴随状语；另外，However,等的运用为文章增色添彩。