Question

【题目】根据提示，请以以下内容，写一篇短文向一位新生Mary介绍你们学校的规章制度。内容包括：

1. 上课不能迟到。

2. 教室要保持(keep)干净和安静。

3. 见到老师要问好。(greet)

4. 不允许在教室里吃东西。

5. 不许在课堂上听音乐，玩游戏。

6. 不要损害花草树木。(pick flowers; climb trees)

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad that you can come to our school. Our school is very beautiful, isn’t it? I have to tell you there are many rules in our school. Remember, don’t be late for class. We must keep our classroom clean and quiet. When we meet our teachers, we must say hello to them. We can’t eat anything in the classroom. And we are not allowed to listen to music or play games in class. We mustn’t pick the flowers or climb the trees anywhere in our campus.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，是向一位新生介绍校规。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇英语短文，内容齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，同时运用高级句子。I’m very glad that you can come to our school. that引导宾语从句；Our school is very beautiful, isn’t it? 反意疑问句的使用恰到好处；Remember, don’t be late for class.祈使句画龙点睛；When we meet our teachers, we must say hello to them. When引导时间状语从句；And we are not allowed to listen to music or play games in class.否定句的“和”用or。