Question

【题目】假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺

词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Now I’d like tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, in which I worked as the guide in a travel agency. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learned how to get along well with others. Beside, I have gained some social experience and you have learned something that can’t be learned from textbook. In a word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.

Answer 1

【答案】1.like后加to

2.the改为a

3.have改为had

4.what改为how

5.删除for

6.ask改为asking

7.Beside改为Besides

8.you改为I

9.textbook改为textbooks

10.wonderfully改为wonderful

【解析】would like to do sth. 是固定用法，意思是想要做某事。

泛指“旅行社的一名导游”， 所以用不定冠词。

句式“This/It is/was the first/second ... last time + that从句”表示“这是第……次做某事”。其中，that引导的是定语从句，that在口语中常省略。对于此句式，若前面的be动词为is，从句通常用现在完成时；若其为was，则从句用过去完成时。

我意识到我的父母挣钱养家有多么辛苦，所以what改为how。

support 是及物动词，后面直接接宾语。

keep on doing sth. 是固定用法，意思是继续做某事。

句意：除此之外，我得了一些社会经验，所以Beside改为Besides。

句意：除此之外，我得了一些社会经验并且学习到了一些我在课本中学不到的东西。所以you改为I。

这里“教科书”是一个复数概念，所以textbook改为textbooks。

用形容词修饰名词。