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8．下面短文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
My uncle lives in the countryside．I still remember the days when I paid a visit to him in last summer．I made friend with many boys of my age here．All of them were easy to get along with．They taught me how to swim in the river but I taught themselves English．Some boys was left behind to live with their grandparents because their parents went to cities to making a living．Though they lived hard life，they studied hard．How I hope I can help them as much as possibly!Now I often kept in touch with them by writing letters．

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分析 短文大意：本文介绍了我的叔叔住在乡下，我仍然记得去年夏天去拜访他的日子．我在那里交了许多朋友，他们都很容易相处，他们教我如何在河里游泳，我教他们英语．有些男孩子被留在家里跟爷爷奶奶住，这是因为他们的父母到城里谋生，尽管他们生活困难，但是他们学习很努力，作者现在经常写信与他们保持联系．

解答 My uncle lives in the countryside．
I still remember the days when I paid a visit to him in last summer．
I made friendwith many boys of my age here．
All of them were easy to get along with．
They taught me how to swim in the river but I taught themselves English．
Some boys was left behind to live with their grandparents because their parents went to cities to making a living．
Though they lived∧hard life，they studied hard．
How I hope I can help them as much as possibly!Now I often kept in touch with them by writing letters．
1．去掉in 介词误用．last summer"去年夏天"，可以直接做状语，前面不需要加介词．
2．friend改为friends 名词单复数用错．根据下文可知作者是与许多男孩子交朋友，因此此处用复数．
3．here改为there 副词用错．根据语境可知是作者回忆的去年夏天的事情，应该是在那里他交了很多朋友．
4．but改为and 连词用错．根据语境可知此处表示并列，不表示转折．
5．themselves改为them 代词误用．此处表示"我教他们英语"，而不是"他们自己"．
6．was改为were 谓语动词单复数用错．此处主语some boys是复数，因此谓语动词也用复数．
7．making改为make 非谓语动词用错．此处前面的to为不定式符号，因此后面用动词原形．这里是不定式短语作状语表示目的．
8．lived后面加a 冠词用错．本句live a hard life意思是"过着艰苦的生活"，此处加上a表示泛指概念．
9．possibly改为possible 形容词误用．此处as much as possible表示"尽可能多的"，应用形容词形式．
10．kept改为keep 时态用错．本句前面有Now，说的是现在的情况，因此应用一般现在时．

点评 本题考查短文改错．短文改错题是高考题型之一，它注重考查考生对所学基础知识及语法的掌握程度，要求考生平时要积累大量的语言及语法知识，做题时还要充分考虑语境，结合所学知识做出正确的判断．