Question

【题目】假如你是李华，橙子辅导准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营（English Summer Camp），请写一封申请信给该培训中心。信的内容必须包括：

1. 申请报名。

2. 为什么想参加这个活动。

3. 对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待。

注意：1.词数100左右。

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture. I am writing to apply for the English Summer Camp.

There are some reasons for my taking part in this activity. For one thing, having a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books, I am crazy about the country’s culture as well as scenery. For another, I personally prefer British English, so while traveling there, I will have a chance to communicate with local people.

As is known to all, English is playing an important role in international society. I expect to have a better understanding of English culture by visiting places of interest. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。假如你是李华，橙子辅导准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营（English Summer Camp），请写一封申请信给该培训中心。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 申请报名；2. 为什么想参加这个活动；3. 对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：English Summer Camp，help us improve English，learn more about English culture，be writing to，apply for，take part in this activity，have a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books，be crazy about the country’s culture，prefer British English，have a chance to communicate with local people，As is known to all，play an important role in international society，have a better understanding of English culture，visit places of interest，take …into consideration。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。