Question

【题目】书面表达

近日教育部（the Ministry of Education）要求加强中小学劳动教育，这一举措引发了人们的热议。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇新闻报道。

学生的观点	一部分学生：劳动教育有助于身体健康，全面发展 另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间，影响成绩
你的观点	……

注意： 1. 词数80左右

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.

As for students, opinions are divided. Some students think that it will be of great benefit for their health, enabling them to be well developed. On the other hand, some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time, which will be spent studying otherwise. And it will have a negative effect on their grades.

It’s true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays, thus lacking the sense of labor. So as far as I’m concerned, students definitely value more what labor brings about.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求写一篇新闻报道，内容是学生对于教育部要求中小学加强劳动教育的观点，写作时注意以下几点：1、涵盖所有内容，首先分两方面陈述学生的观点，最后阐述自己的观点。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】所写内容连贯、结构紧凑，运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇。比如：enabling them to be well developed.现在分词做伴随的状语；同位语从句the view that this kind of education will take up their time ；非限制性定语从句which will be spent studying otherwise；还有On the other hand 另一方面；as far as I’m concerned,就我而言等短语使语句间连接紧凑。