Question

据世界卫生组织（WHO）统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害；

2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；

3. 吸烟影响青少年成长；

4. 二手烟同样有害；

5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办？

注意： 1. 词数：100词左右； 2. 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Saying No to Smoking

　　According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and outside from May 1 on.

As is known to all, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。