Question

6．第一节　基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
请依据以下信息，为英语校报写篇短文，介绍你（刘芳）参加"社会实践活动"的情况．
【写作内容】
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里．今天你的房东 Mrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy来电留言：
1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3）尽快回电
注意：1．词数100字左右；
2，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容．
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To enrich my social life，gain more experience and inspire me to study harder，I participated in the activity，working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than 10 days during the winter vocation．
高分句型二：
The work made me really tired，which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents to earn money．
句型一 ①To enrich my social life 此处使用了不定式位于句首作目的状语
           ②working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than…此处使用了现在分词作伴随状语，同时表该动作为主动
句型二 which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents…该句是一个由which作引导词的非限制性定语从句，which在句中充当主语，替代前面出现的先行词work

解答 I'm Liu Fang，a Senior Three student aged 18，and I'd like to share my social practice experience with you．To enrich my social life，gain more experience and inspire me to study harder，I participated in the activity，working in a Xinhua Bookstore for more than 10 days during the winter vocation．（高分句型一）（表明目的）There，I mainly did some cleaning，put the books in order and introduced books to customers and I also helped the salesmen sell books 8 hours a day．The work made me really tired，which helps me realize that it's not easy for our parents to earn money．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，I have also learned how to communicate with different customers，which has built up my confidence．

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，此类作文要点明确，规定了考生的表述思路，写作时要根据提示，紧密结合提示展开叙述，语言使用准确，简洁明了的表达．