Question

假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：
（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；
（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；
（3）时间：星期六晚六点；
（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；
（5）路线：在Jane所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意：（1）须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
（2）词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party
Dear Jane,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English .We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
　　It's pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way，you may take Bus N o. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。目的是邀请Jane参加为她举办的欢送会，同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要点时以时间为顺序，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。象文章的句子：It's pity that you have to go back soon!就是it的形式主语。
考点：考查提纲类短文写作。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，本文以时间为序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。