Question

16．假定你是高三学生李华，受学生会邀请为高一新生作交流发言．发言主题为"高中生要学会什么"．请你结合自身经历和体会，准备一份英语发言稿．内容包括：
1．学会做人；
2．学会学习；
3．学会其他．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，只将发言稿内容写在答题卡上．
Dear students，
I am glad to be here to share my idea about what you should learn．
                                                  
Thanks for your attention．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一份英语发言稿，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：结合自身经历和体会谈谈高中生要学会什么．首先学会做人，然后学会学习，最后独立，克服生活中的困难等等．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为学会做人．第二部分为学会学习．第三部分为学会其他．
重点短语与句型：
cooperate with 与…合作
 get along well with  与…相处的好
develop the good habit of养成好的习惯
For instance 例如
It is highly recommended that…强烈推荐，此句型后需要用虚拟语气should
Only in this way can we form the good habit of learning．Only+介词短语后用部分倒装

解答 Dear students，
    I am glad to be here to share my idea about what you should learn．From my point of view，how to be a man is first required．We had better grow up to learn to be honest and kind．It is highly recommended that we should spend more time in helping and cooperating with others．In that way，we can learn how to get along well with others and know who we are，what we should do and what we'd better not．
The second required is to study．Learning how to learn and developing the good habit of learning are the two vital parts in the process of study．For instance，we are supposed to preview before class，pay close attention to what our teacher are saying，and review the knowledge we have gained．Only in this way can we form the good habit of learning．
    Besides，It is advisable for us to learn how to live independently and how to deal with the difficulties properly in daily life．Learn to wash our clothes，clean rooms，cook，etc．
That's what I'd like to say．What's your opinions？
Thanks for your attention．

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．