Question

15．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
   3．请在答题卷原文上修改．
In the summer holiday，we traveled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．Besides，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street．Your can never be too carefully when crossing the street．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍青岛街道干净，空气清新，真是一个美丽的城市．但那儿的人开车太快，过马路时再怎么小心也不为过．

解答 In the summer holiday，we traveled to Qingdao and paid∧visit to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．Besides，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street．Your can never be too carefully when crossing the street．
详解：
 1．加a 考查冠词．pay a visit to意为"参观某地或拜访某人"，是固定短语．
2．bored改为boring 考查词语用法．bored意为"厌烦的"，表示人的感受，boring意为"令人厌烦的"，形容事物的性质．此处修饰journey，表示"令人厌烦的旅行"．
3．fall改为fell  考查动词时态．根据时间状语the moment I arrived，表示发生在过去的事情，谓语语动词用一般过去时态．  
4．such改为so  考查固定搭配．so和such都意为"如此"，其正确语序为so+adj．+a+n．；such+a+adj．+n．．此处要用so．
5．cleaning改为clean 考查形容词．clean是形容词，意为"干净的"，做are的表语．
6．去掉to 考查动词用法．feel sb．/sth．doing sth．意为"感觉某人正在做某事"，doing做feel的宾语补足语，to是多余的，要去掉．   
7．far改为long 考查固定短语．根据句意：只要天气允许，你可以去钓鱼． as long as意为"只要"，是固定短语．  
8．Besides改为However 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
9．driver改为drivers  考查名词复数．该处指青岛所有的司机，故用名词复数．
10．carefully改为careful 考查句意理解．由上文可知，那儿的人开车太快．所以过马路时再怎么小心也不为过．can't be too+adj．意为"再…也不为过，越…越好"．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．