Question

【题目】假定你是李华，在网上看到英国高中生Mike登出的交友启示。他希望结识中国朋友，学习中国语言和文化。请你写一封邮件回复他，内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.表示愿意成为他的朋友；

3. 你将如何帮助他。

注意：

1词数100左右

2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student from China. I’ve learned from the Internet that you want to make Chinese friends so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I’m happy that you show great interest in Chinese and I’d like to be your friend.

I think I can help you to know more about China by sending e-mails. We can also have online chats about Chinese customs, festivals or food. What’s more, when you have an opportunity to come to China, I will show you many places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. I hope we can keep in touch.

I am expecting your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文，要求用英文写一封信邮件，回复你在网上看到英国高中生Mike登出的交友启示。他希望结识中国朋友，学习中国语言和文化。内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.表示愿意成为他的朋友；3. 你将如何帮助他。写作时注意条理清楚，态度诚恳，要点全面。准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如so as to；show great interest in；have an opportunity to；places of interest；keep in touch等；还运用句型I’ve learned from the Internet that you want to make Chinese friends so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.和I’m happy that you show great interest in Chinese and I’d like to be your friend.这两句话运用了并语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如What’s more，Anyway,，when等等。