Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你班交换生 Jim 因“新冠”肺炎的原因无法返校，来信向你咨询学习事宜。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.开学日期推迟；

2.学校辅导（在线教育、心理……）；

3.如有调整，及时通知。

注意: 1.字数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使文章行文连贯。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 novel coronavirus; 心理的 psychological

Dear Jim,

I hope everything goes well with you.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I hope everything goes well with you. It’s a pity that you can’t return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus. I’m writing to tell you more about it.

Prevention and control of the virus is the top priority (优先) at present. The opening date of the new term has to be postponed (推迟). All the students are not allowed to go to school. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during the absence from school. By the way, it wouldn’t be better if you could work out regularly at home and keep healthy. Only by doing so can you get your immune system (免疫系统) strengthened. If there is any adjustment, I will keep you informed ahead of time. Please take it lightly.

Willingly, I’ll give you my helping hand whenever you need it! Wish you good luck!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给你班交换生Jim，回复他因为“新冠”肺炎的原因无法返校之后的学习事宜，要求写明开学日期推迟、学校辅导情况等。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 开学日期推迟；

2. 学校辅导（在线教育、心理……）；

3. 学校有调整会及时通知。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

It’s a pity that +从句；novel coronavirus；postpone；online psychological guidance；only by doing +（部分）倒装句；immune system; ahead of time

第三步：连词成句

1. It’s a pity that you can’t return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus.

2. The opening date of the new term has to be postponed (推迟).

3. Online education, including online psychological guidance, will be provided during the absence from school.

4. Only by doing so can you get your immune system (免疫系统) strengthened.

5. I will keep you informed ahead of time.

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表 陈 述 事 实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改