Question

4．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack对你们学校最近开展的"书香校园"活动很感兴趣．请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．"书香校园"活动开展的情况；
2．你对该活动的看法．
注意：1．词数100字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
书香校园：Scholarly Campus
Dear Jack，
    I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．I'm eager to tell you something about it．
Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）
As for me，I'm more than happy to join in the activity．Not only does it arouse students'interest in reading，but it also cultivates students'love for knowledge and，more importantly，for life．I'm sure it will bring benefits for students．
Wish you all the best!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对英国朋友Jack对你们学校最近开展的"书香校园"活动很感兴趣．请你用英语给他写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点："书香校园"活动开展的情况；你对该活动的看法．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be eager to渴望去做；with the aim of 有…的目的；As for 至于，关于；more than非常；not only，but also不仅，而且；
Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）
We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）
Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．I'm eager to tell you something about it．
     Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）
     As for me，I'm more than happy to join in the activity．Not only does it arouse students'interest in reading，but it also cultivates students'love for knowledge and，more importantly，for life．I'm sure it will bring benefits for students．
     Wish you all the best!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．