Question

【题目】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Jack was gone.

For six years, Jack had lived four floors directly below him. If it hadn’t been for the fire escape, the two best friends could have seen each other by sticking their heads out of their bedroom windows.

Every summer had been filled with bike rides and baseball, but last summer—the summer of Cyclops—had been the best.

Kyle and Jack had created the pulley contraption (滑轮), which Jack named Cyclops, from old bicycles, a backpack and a long rope. It ran beside the fire escape, and anything that fit into the pack could be slid from Kyle to Jack and back again. Cyclops had exchanged messages, comics and even chocolate cookies between windows.

Three days ago, Jack said good-bye to Kyle, saying his family was moving. Cyclops’ backpack rested on the fire escape outside Jack’s empty bedroom.

Staring at the ceiling over his bed, Kyle felt sad and lonely. Zzzoop! Kyle ran to the window, only to find Cyclops rushing toward him. ‘‘Jack?” he shouted. Kyle opened the backpack and found a note “This is cool. Did you make it?” Disappointed, he threw the note away and closed the window, muttering (咕哝着) to the faceless stranger in Jack’s room, “Forget it.”

Minutes later, Kyle ran his eyes over Cyclops. Having read one page of his favorite comic, he looked at it again. He wrote a note. “Who are you?” Zzzooop! “I’m Max.” “I’m Kyle. How old are you?”

Cyclops whirred (呼呼地响), carrying notes between Kyle and Max. They discovered they would be in Mrs. Parker’ fifth grade class next year. They both loved riding bikes and playing baseball but hated strawberry jam.

Kyle sent three cookies and a note down. Cyclops ran between the windows as Kyle and Max made crucial decisions, like how to go to the zoo, when and where to meet. “Feel like going to the zoo tomorrow? Zzzooop! “OK.”

Para. 1: Early the next morning, Kyle got ready and his mom smilingly held the door open.

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Para. 2: It was a girl that was pushing the bike and approaching him.

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Answer 1

【答案】Early the next morning, Kyle got ready and his mom smilingly held the door open.She told Kyle that it was nice to see him go out to play with friends. Making no reply, Kyle just said good-bye, rode on his bike and left. He didn’t get rid of the sorrow for Jack’s moving away, but still expected for meeting Max in the zoo. According to the agreement, Kyle arrived at the gate of the zoo, standing there with a baseball in his hand, which was a sign to recognize. He searched everywhere for a boy who was holding a baseball just like him. Suddenly, Kyle heard a voice calling his name behind him. So he turned around.

It was a girl that was pushing the bike and approaching him. Both were surprised, especially Kyle. “Eh…are you Max?” Kyle asked doubtfully for he thought Max was supposed to be a boy. The girl answered,“ Yes, so…you’re Kyle?” They recognized each other then went into the zoo. Kyle and Max had a good time that day. Cyclops started to run between two windows again, and Kyle has never felt sad and lonely since then.

【解析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。

读后续写这种题型首先要求考生对于所给文段的内容和结构梳理清楚，在此基础上根据给出的段落开头适当发挥想象，使文章完整、合理即可。

文章大意可以梳理如下：Jack和Kyle是同住在一栋楼上的好朋友，他们做出了一个名叫Cyclops的滑轮，可以在两人的窗户之间滑动，可以传递一些信息和东西。三天前Jack一家搬走了，Kyle对此感到很孤独伤心。Jack的房子住进了自称Max的人，两人素未谋面却通过留下的Cyclops互传纸条逐渐熟悉了起来，并约好第二天一起去动物园玩。续写的部分就从这里开始。

续写第一段所给内容为“第二天一早，Kyle准备好了，他妈妈笑着给他打开了大门”，续写第二段所给内容为“是一个女孩子推着自行车向他走过来”，可以循着这种思路展开：

第一段里写Kyle的母亲给他的叮嘱，然后描述他一路去往商量好的见面地点，反映前文的“how to go to the zoo, when and where to meet”这些内容，可以写为：She told Kyle that it was nice to see him go out to play with friends. Making no reply, Kyle just said good-bye, rode on his bike and left. He didn’t get rid of the sorrow for Jack’s moving away, but still expected for meeting Max in the zoo. According to the agreement, Kyle arrived at the gate of the zoo, standing there with a baseball in his hand, which was a sign to recognize. He searched everywhere for a boy who was holding a baseball just like him. Suddenly, Kyle heard a voice calling his name behind him. So he turned around.

第二段可以设计为那个女孩就是Max，两个人见面然后一起在动物园玩，Kyle又有了新朋友，结尾可以再串上前文的Cyclops，使文章结构完整，可以写为：Both were surprised, especially Kyle. “Eh…are you Max?” Kyle asked doubtfully. The girl answered,“ Yes, so…you’re Kyle?” They recognized each other then went into the zoo. Kyle and Max had a good time that day. Cyclops started to run between two windows again, and Kyle has never felt sad and lonely since then.