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13．假如你是李华，上周末你和美国网友Tom在QQ上交流了寒假旅游的计划，且得知Tom有来中国旅游的想法．请根据以下要点给她回封邮件：
要点：1）告知自己旅游详细计划（时间，地点，方式，住宿等）； 2．）邀请Tom一起旅行．
要求：1）词数100左右，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯．
2）信的格式与开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this winter．    
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

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分析 本篇为电邮．写作要点包括：1）告知自己旅游详细计划（时间，地点，方式，住宿等）； 2．）邀请Tom一起旅行．

解答 Dear Tom，
  I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this summer．With my parents'permission，I've decided to cycle to Lhasa with my two classmates．
  We will first take a train to Chengdu，which is the starting point of the Chuanzang Road，and then begin our ride there．We plan to ride for about 12 days，enjoying the beautiful scenes along the road．We will live in the Youth Hotel In order to save some money．Staying in Lhasa for about 3 days，we are going to visit the Potala Palace and also see the sunset on the Potala Square．
  It is sure to be a special experience because we have not gone so far alone without parents nearby．I hope you can come to China and join us．
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

点评 考生需熟悉书信格式．考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．