Question

【题目】根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim计划暑假来北京进行为期三天的旅行，发邮件请你推荐行程安排。请你参考下面提供的信息给他回邮件，介绍行程安排，并给出推荐理由。

邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

visit Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum

go to the Great Wall

see pandas in Beijing Zoo

Dear Jim,

I’m so glad you’re coming to Beijing this summer. I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m so glad that you’re coming to Beijing this summer. I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square, one of the largest squares in the world. Then, I advise the Palace Museum, where the emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live. I am sure you will be amazed at its magnificence. The Great Wall should be strongly recommended as it is a must-see for most of the foreign visitors. If you don’t have a tight schedule, Beijing Zoo is a good choice for you will see lovely pandas, which are typical of China.

I hope my recommendations are helpful to you. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求回一封邮件。

第一步：

审题： 邮件 推荐游览北京的行程安排

人称：第二人称

时态：一般将来时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示很高兴Jim来北京，愿意推荐游玩的景点，第二部分推荐的行程安排，第三部分希望你的推荐对Jim有帮助。

要点：

1. 表示很高兴Jim来北京，愿意推荐游玩的景点

2. 推荐的行程安排

①从游览天安门开始，然后游览故宫

②长城是必去之地

③行程不是很紧的话，推荐去北京动物园看熊猫

3. 希望你的推荐对Jim有帮助

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

introduce sth. to sb.；start with；advise；be amazed at；recommend；a must-see；have a tight schedule；a good choice；be typical of；be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

(1)I’m so glad that you’re coming to Beijing this summer.

(2) I’d like to introduce some wonderful places to you.

(3) You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square.

(4) Tian’anmen Square is one of the largest squares in the world.

(5) I advise the Palace Museum.

(6) The emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live in the Palace Museum.

(7) You will be amazed at its magnificence.

(8) I strongly recommend the Great Wall.

(9) It is a must-see for most of the foreign visitors.

(10) If you don’t have a tight schedule, Beijing Zoo is a good choice.

(11) You will see lovely pandas.

(12) Pandas are typical of China.

(12) I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句，适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

将第2个句子作同位语,连接下面两个句子

(3) You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square.

(4) Tian’anmen Square is one of the largest squares in the world.

→You can start your trip with Tian’anmen Square, one of the largest squares in the world.

将第2个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子

(5) I advise the Palace Museum.

(6) The emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live in the Palace Museum.

→I advise the Palace Museum, where the emperors of the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty used to live.

为避免句式重复单调，用被动语态改写下面的句子

(8) I strongly recommend the Great Wall.

→The Great Wall should be strongly recommended.

将第2个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子

(11) You will see lovely pandas.

(12) Pandas are typical of China.

→You will see lovely pandas, which are typical of China.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。