Question

15．结合下列三幅图，以"Humans Are Cleverer"为题写一篇关于机器人的短文，内容包括以下几点：
1．机器人在生活中已经在为人类提供服务．
2．机器人不会超过人类，因为机器人是由人类设计、制造和控制的．
3．通过描述图中发生的事，说明上述事实．

注意：1．图画内容只是短文的组成部分，不是全部，要通过联想加以叙述；
2．词数：120个左右参考词汇：play cards打牌；program程序
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息结合下列三幅图，以"Humans Are Cleverer"为题写一篇关于机器人的短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：机器人在生活中已经在为人类提供服务；机器人不会超过人类，因为机器人是由人类设计、制造和控制的；通过描述图中发生的事，说明上述事实． 2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：With the development of modern science and technology随着现代科学和技术的发展；play an important part in在…方面起重要作用；be used to do被用来做某事；
 With the development of modern science and technology，robots have been invented and have played an important part in modern society．（高分句型一）
In many fields robots can be used to do those hard，difficult and dangerous work instead of humans．（高分句型二）
After he changed the programs of the robot，he began to play cards with the robot again．（高分句型三）

解答 Humans Are Cleverer
      With the development of modern science and technology，robots have been invented and have played an important part in modern society．（高分句型一）Robots can do many k inds of work for human beings．In many fields robots can be used to do those hard，difficult and dangerous work instead of humans．（高分句型二）
      Are robots cleverer than humans？No，because they are designed，made and controlled by humans．Once，a man was playing cards with a robot．He was defeated in the first three runs．He was very angry and then he had an idea．After he changed the programs of the robot，he began to play cards with the robot again．（高分句型三）This time the robot was beaten．The man won by three points．From this story we can see that humans are cleverer than robots．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．