Question

近年来中国中学生中出现了 “出国学习热”，成千上万的中学生已经去国外学习，而许多其他学生还一直在设法出国，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示，以Studying Abroad 为题写一篇短文。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 与不同文化背景的人交友 2. 学习国外先进的科学技术 3. 更快地学习外语	1. 年纪小、缺乏生活经验，自理能力差 2. 情感孤独，思乡 3. 生活和学习费用高
你 自 己 的 看 法

注意：1．短文须包括所有要点，内容连贯；

2．词数；120左右；开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

要点提示：先进科学技术advanced knowledge of science and technology，生活经验living experience

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Studying   Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. As for this, different people have different opinions.

There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Still, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themse lves without any living experience. Moreover, being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick. / miss their families. And further, the high cost is also a problem for common families

In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.

【解析】

试题分析：这是阐述优缺点的议论文，话题是出国学习热的问题。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；优点和缺点以及自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。

【亮点说明】范文结构清晰，句式富于变化：students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures.这句话用了定语从句， Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience这句话用了too…to…结构， being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick. / miss their families. 这句话用了非谓语动词做状语， In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .这句话用了it做形式主语，They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.这句话用了并列句和定语从句还有动名词。还有范文使用了很多关联词，如First, Second, Still, On the other hand, . Moreover And further,使文章更加连贯。

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