Question

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。（请将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

Answer 1

An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”. This picture precisely captures one of such situations—a bottle of milk has been accidentally dropped onto the ground. The reactions of the two individuals in the pictures are totally different. One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”
There are rich implications underlying this scene. For the same event, two different individuals make two totally different observations and comments. For the pessimistic mind, they tend to give up. Finally, they would blame the failure on others.
By contrast, people with an optimistic state of mind would turn the negative into the positive, through efforts. With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off. Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.

试题分析：这是一篇开放式作文，也是看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了人们对待同样问题的不同看法，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】范文出现了一些常用的词组：tend to往往， blame sth on sb把…归咎于…，By contrast,相比而言，还有复杂的句型：An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式宾语， One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”这句话用了现在分词做状语， There are rich implications underlying this scene.这句话用了现在分词做定语， With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off.这句话用了过去分词做状语和as long as引导条件状语从句， Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.这两句话都用了定语从句。