分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息以"My Dreaming Senior Year(理想高三)"为题写一篇100-120词的英语短文参加比赛,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:简单做自我介绍;高三学习时间设计;业余活动的设想等. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be busy with 忙于;prepare for为…作准备;besides另外; to be honest诚实的说;keep healthy保持健康;all in all总之;get along with事情进展,相处;
Next term,I'll be busier with my study,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.(高分句型一)
Also,I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.(高分句型二)
All in all,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with study and life in the coming year.(高分句型三)
解答 I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Senior High School.Next term,I'll be busier with my study,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.(高分句型一)Besides,time is limited and I'll make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.To be honest,I don't want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.Just as the proverb says,"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."So we need some free time to relax our mind,especially at the weekends and on holidays.Also,I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.(高分句型二)
All in all,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with study and life in the coming year.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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