Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My dad is an enthusiastic runner. Influencing by him, I was very sporty before the age of 15. Therefore, after I went to high school, I stopped to taking physical exercise because of my busy schoolwork. One morning, I ran for only one minute to catch a bus, but I was quite out breath. This made me realizing that I was overweight. Then I made a decision which I would take up a sport to help myself get in shape again. A friend of me recommended(推荐) a swimming pool not far away from my house. Now I go swimming several times one week and have started to feel the benefit of regularly exercise. Swimming makes me relaxed and energy.

Answer 1

【答案】1.Influencing--Influenced

2. Therefore--However

3. to删去

4. out of breath

5.realizing--realize

6. which--that

7. me--mine

8. one--a

9. regularly--regular

10. energy--energetic

【解析】1.句意：受他的影响，我十五岁就爱运动。主语I和influence之间是被动关系，此处是过去分词做原因状语，故把Influencing—Influenced。

2.句意：我上中学后因为忙于学业把体育锻炼停下来。前后是转折关系，故把Therefore—However。

3.固定结构：stop doing停止做某事，故把to去掉。

4.固定词组：out of breath上气不接下气，故在out 和breath之间加of。

5.句意：这使我意识到我体重增加。make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，故把realizing—realize。

6.此处decision后面是同位语从句而不是定语从句，故把which—that。

7.固定用法：a friend of mine我的一个朋友，此处是双重所有，故把me—mine。

8.固定结构：一周几次。故把one---a。

9.句意：与规律的锻炼。形容词修饰名词，故把regularly—regular。

10.句意：游泳使我放松和精力充沛。此处是形容做宾语补足语，故把energy—energetic。