Question

请根据下图提示，用英语写一篇短文。先简要描写下图，然后再发表你自己的看法和意见。

注意：
1．词数：120左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．参考词汇：孤独（寂寞）get lonely

Answer 1

不唯一
One possible version:
It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.
Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend time together with them and take care of them in every possible way.

试题分析：这是一篇看图说话类作文。根据题目要要写清楚两部分内容，其一，是根据图画描述图画中内容。其二，发表自己的看法和观点。这两点内容缺一不可。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要把题目给出的内容要点都要写到,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点评：本文属于看图说话类作文，这幅图反映的是一种社会现象。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同时要注意要求的字数，120左右，同时也不要写得过于冗长，适度即可。