Question

16．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．根据对图片的理解及英语提示写一篇短文．首先描述图片点明主题，分析其含义，最后发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点部分  I think the picture wants to tell us when we learn something，we should have a thorough study of it．（高分句型一）句中带有when引导的时间状语从句
Just like the man in the picture，however he tries，he'll never get fish in the well．（高分句型二）句中带有however引导的让步状语从句

解答 In the picture we can see a man fishing in a well．According to his book knowledge，fish are always living in the water，so he chooses a well to fish in．
Fish do live in the water，but do they live in the well？I think the picture wants to tell us when we learn something，we should have a thorough study of it．（高分句型一）Otherwise we'll make some silly mistakes．Just like the man in the picture，however he tries，he'll never get fish in the well．（高分句型二）
So when we learn something we should try to have a thorough understanding of it．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．