Question

【题目】每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mother,

Sorry to tell you the recent test has failed me. Here is the reasons. Firstly, the wrong belief is that led to failure. I have held the belief that it is not use doing well in school. Good grades can’t surely bring us beef. In addition to, I am lacking in hard work at learning. What’s most terrible is that I spend too many time in collecting old stamps. To do well in school in the near future, we have made a plan, hoping it will pay off. From now on, I will pay more attention to subject learning. After all , as a student, learning is of greatly importance. Only by working hard can one make progress. At same time, I will turn to my teachers and classmates for advices or help actively if I come across some problems.

Yours Sincerely

Jenny

Answer 1

【答案】1.is改为 are

2. that改为what

3.not 改为no

4.去掉to

5. many 改为much

6.well改为 better

7.we 改为I

8.greatly 改为great

9.same 前加上the

10. advices 改为advice

【解析】本文作者对自己这次考试失败的原因进行了分析。

考查主谓一致。由the reasons.可判断出是复数意义，所以is改为 are。

考查表语从句。what led to failure. 作is后的表语，所以what led to failure. 是一个表语从句，引导词在从句中作主语，所以that改为what。

考查固定句型。it is no use doing sth.做某事没有用，是固定句型，所以not 改为no。

考查固定用法。另外，我在学习上缺乏勤奋。In addition另外，此外，是固定用法，所以去掉to。

考查固定用法。too many意为"太多"，用于修饰可数名词的复数，toomuch意为"太多"，用于修饰不可数名词，这里time是不可数名词，所以many 改为much。

考查比较级。为了在不久的将来，在学校做的更好，我制定了一个计划。表示“做的更好”，所以用比较级，well改为 better。

考查代词。为了在不久的将来，在学校做的更好，我制定了一个计划。所以we 改为I。

考查形容词。修饰名词importance，用形容词，所以greatly 改为great。

考查固定用法。At the same time同时，是固定用法，所以same 前加上the。

考查名词。advice是不可数名词，所以advices 改为advice。