Question

【题目】假如你是四川省双流中学高三（4）班的班长李华，你班上的同学张明将要留学去澳大利亚的学校学习。请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一封推荐信。

要点提示：

1.你的身份；

2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；

3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数不少于100。

3.信得开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,

I am honored to recommend Zhang Ming to you, as he wants to apply to your school.

As the monitor in our class, I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming. We have been classmates for more than two years. He has given me a good impression. Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working. He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school. Our teachers all like him and encourage us to follow his example. Secondly, having talents in other things, such as singing and debating, he has helped to organize several class activities. Besides, he is also caring and lively. He is always ready to help classmates, and he spreads happiness wherever he goes.

I know he will meet your school’s requirements. If he is admitted into your school, I am sure he will perform even better in your school.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一封推荐信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.你的身份；2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be familiar with对……熟悉，do well in在……某方面干得好。还使用了倒装，Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working.和宾语从句I know he will meet your school’s requirements.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。