Question

作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，以Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams 为题，简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。

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词数：120左右，开头已经写好，不计入总数。

不要逐字翻译，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：分析原因  analyze the cause

Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure.

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure. Some students feel so disappointed at their poor performance in exams that they have fear and anxiety about exams. Even worse, they may lose heart and give up.

  However, others regard failure as part of the process towards their final goal, taking an active attitude towards failure. Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

  As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men may have failed many times before they finally succeed. In other words, failure can teach us more than success does. We need to have s good state of mind to face challenges in our future life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于正反观点类议论文，讨论的话题是中学生对待失败态度。本题材上来说属于议论文，所以使用一般现在时，人称主要以第三人称为主，在发表个人观点的时候，使用第一人称。要点：1.人人都经历过成功和失败，但是不同的人对待失败有不同的观点。2. 当考试没有取得理想成绩时，有些人感觉失望，丧失信心，不再继续努力。3. 当考试失败时，有些人分析并找出失败的原因，鼓励自己，增强自信，避免再犯同样的错误。4.你的观点：失败乃成功之母。我们要从失败中得出教训，完善自我，取得更大的进步。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】：本文最大的特殊就是高级句式的运用。如Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.中not only后面接的部分倒装句的形式。As we all know, failure is the mother of success.中as引导的非限制性定语从句，以及谚语failure is the mother of success。

考点：考察正反观点类短文