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【题目】假定你是李华，是校报小记者。请你为校报写一篇英语短文，介绍最近在我国很多城市发生的雾霾天气。请参考以下要点：
1)．危害：阻碍交通，危害健康
2)．原因：空气污染
3)．如何自我防护：雾霾天气早晚少开窗户；多吃水果补充维生素
注意：1．词数120左右；2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：雾霾haze 维生素vitamin
Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China.

Answer 1

【答案】One Possible Version

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. It's one of the most dangerous weather conditions. Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What's worse, it also affects our health. if breathing in haze, people may feel uncomfortable and get ill.

The reason for haze is air pollution. It results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sties. In view of the above, we need to protect ourselves from haze pollution. First of all, in case of haze pollution, we shouldn't open the windows or take exercise before the sun rises and after sunset. Besides, we'd better wear masks when we go outside. What's more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如What's worse、In view of the above、First of all、Besides，使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。3.注意语气，此文是为校报写的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较中肯，不应该出现过多的带有个人感情色彩的词语。4.此作文要分三个部分写，每个部分要列举一下例子，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease。5.多采用一些高级句型，如we'd better wear masks when we go outside，It's one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同时使用一些词组如due to ， result from，get enough，build up等。