Question

10．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．I know your parents want you be a student with artistic skills．Needlessly to say，a student with some artistic skills is more popular in school as well as in society．Having some artistic skills also help understand and master the general subject，such as math，English，and so on．
Therefore，interest is much more important．If you show no interest in it，you are more likely to learn it well．And it won't help you much．Some day in the future，you will regret making such a choice．
In my opinion，you should follow my heart．You should do whichever you are doing well．If you learn your academic subjects well，you can still enter into a famous university．Art is not the only approach to succeed．

Answer 1

分析 本文讨论的是课外学习艺术课程的必要性．
在学校和社会上，有艺术能力的学生会更受欢迎，同时艺术课程会有助于学生学习好其他科目．但是，如果你对那些科目不感兴趣，你就学不好那些科目，将来会后悔那个选择．我认为你应该听从内心的声音，做你能做好的事．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．I know your parents want you∧be a student with artistic skills．Needlessly to say，a student with some artistic skills is more popular in school as well as in society．Having some artistic skills alsohelp understand and master the generalsubject，such as math，English，and so on．
Therefore，interest is much more important．If you show no interest in it，you are more likely to learn it well．And it won't help you much．Some day in the future，you will regret making such a choice．
In my opinion，you should follow my heart．You should do whichever you are doing well．If you learn your academic subjects well，you can still enter into a famous university．Art is not the only approach to succeed．
解析：
1．be 前加to．考查固定句式．表示"想要某人成为"用want sb to be，所以 be 前加to．
2．Needlessly-Needless．考查固定短语．Needless to say表示"很显然"，是固定用法．
3．help-helps．考查主谓一致关系．本文讲述的是现在的事，所以动名词Having some artistic skills做主语，谓语动词 help 用第三人称单数，所以用helps．
4．subject-subjects．考查名词．根据后文such as math，English，and so on可知用可数名词的复数subjects．
5．Therefore-However．考查副词辨析．interest is much more important表示"兴趣更重要"，和上段是转折关系，所以用However．
6．more-less．考查语义一致．根据上句可知If you show no interest in it，you are more likely to learn it well．表示"如果你没有兴趣，你不可能学的好"，所以用less．
7．my-your．考查代词一致．本句表示"你应该听从你的心"，所以用your．
8．whichever-whatever．考查宾语从句的引导词．引导宾语从句you are doing well做从句的宾语，应该用whatever，表示"做你能做好的事"．
9．去掉into．考查介词．enter表示"come into"，所以后面的into是多余的，因此去掉into．
10．succeed-success．考查派生词． approach to 后用名词，表示"…的方法"，所以用名词success．

点评 考查短文改错．
approach 做名词时的用法．
1．接近，靠近；即将达到[U][（+of）]
Snow announced the approach of winter．雪宣告了冬季的来临．
2．通道，入口[C][（+to）]
3．方法，方式；态度[C][（+to）]
I like her approach to the problem．我喜欢她解决这个问题的方法．
4．接近的表示，接洽[P1][（+to）]