Question

【题目】90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林，请根据下表中所提供信息以"Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。

90后的境遇：面临更多的升学和就业烦恼，所处环境竞争更加激烈。

人们的忧虑：1.注重自我，轻视合作；......

2.缺乏毅力，容易气馁；......

3.盲目追求，渴望成名。......

我们的长处：敢于挑战，......(请考生联系自己拟定内容，再列举两至三点。)

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.

Living in an environment full of fierce competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.

They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.

However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Of course, we still need to learn more from those experienced. Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于演讲稿，根据提示信息的具体情况来行文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点，然后根据要点写出自己的观点和感受。此篇是演讲稿写作，应要注意表达自己的情感在里面。2、分析文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，要依据提示词语来行文。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Living in an environment full of fierce competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.动词ing作伴随状语和插入定语从句；Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.和They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.是非限制性定语从句；and this is what it takes to do any job well.是表语从句等。此外，文章还使用了大量短语be faced with , Under these circumstances , be unwilling to, cooperate with, make…hard for … to do，lack in，in time of, be eager to do, have the courage to do, take risks等,另外Besides, However, Firstly, In addition, Of course等的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。