Question

【题目】When was the last time you had fun with your parents? Your parents are all busy during working days; during the weekends, you may want to hang out with them but they may have to work extra hours.

This is not uncommon. In China, both of the parents have their jobs. Most of theparents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. A recent survey done in the US found that more than half of American parents spend less than three hours having fun with their children each week.

As the Daily Mail noted: Families are spending little quality time creating bonds and precious memories together during the week because of the demands of modern life.

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因；

3. 结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children, which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons.（26

There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon. First, in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before, so they have to spend most of their time making money. In addition, parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company.

Take my own experience for example. Once upon a time, I got into trouble in my studies. It was my parents’ company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence. Plain and peaceful as it was, this experience left an unforgettable impression on me, which is of great significance to my growth.（134）

【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的英文提示和汉语提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心，用最简练的语言概括文章的大意。然后再根据文章内容发表自己的观点。内容包括：1. 简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因；2. 结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响。写作时要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的句子：it is not uncommon that…使用了主语从句；which may result from…和which is of great significance to my growth使用了定语从句；accounting for this phenomenon是现在分词作定语；when keeping their children company使用了状语从句的省略；It was my parents’ company and comfort that…使用了强调句型。文章还应用了较多的高级词汇和短语：contemporary；distracted ；electronic products；Take my own experience for example；had a great effect on；unforgettable impression；of great significance等等。